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Lisa Lee's avatar

I love it. Atmospheric, suspenseful. I get you can't expand on it specifically, but maybe there could be a collection of stories in that universe that create a broader picture.

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Lucas Mangum's avatar

Great idea!

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Grant Wamack's avatar

Great opening and such a fire chapter. Atmosphere and dread are fantastic. Wish this could have come to fruition.

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Lucas Mangum's avatar

Thanks, Grant! Me too. I’m glad I got to share it in some form, at least.

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Lucas Mangum's avatar

Thanks, Dizzy!

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